Thank you for finding and reporting those language errors. I believe I have found and updated everything that you stated, and found a couple myself. One change that was a little different was the "Vendor" part you mentioned. I replaced "Enterprise Vendor" with "The Upstream Vendor", to be more consistent with the rest of the website. Thanks Troy On 08/11/2011 09:16 AM, Mason Loring Bliss wrote: > I've found a number of language errors on the Scientific Linux web site, and > I'd love to be able to correct them, or to at least provide patches such that > they're corrected. I'm not sure what the requirements are for that sort of > access, but for now I'll just include the fixes here: > > On http://scientificlinux.org/: > > Is: An example of of items that were added are > Should be: Examples of items that were added are > > Is: Or, if a users wishes > Should be: Or, if a user wishes > > On http://www.scientificlinux.org/maillists/: > > Is: development ideas. Such as debate > Should be: development ideas, such as debate > > Is: blank, and enter the one of the > Should be: blank, and enter one of the > > On http://www.scientificlinux.org/about/history.long: > > Is: instalation > Should be: installation > > Is: Universities > Should be: universities > > Is: Many of the lab's represented > Should be: Many of the labs represented > > Is: Both lab's were > Should be: Both labs were > > (the following appears twice) > Is: comming > Should be: coming > > Is: difficult at time. > Should be: difficult at times. > > Is: times where > Should be: times when > > Is: was the new > Should be: involved supporting new > > Is: Vendor > Should be: vendor > > Is: very little > Should be: very few > > > Apologies for this not being a proper diff, but as the pages are evidently > presented as a wiki, my supplying a diff against the HTML would likely > obfuscate the changes rather than highlighting them. > > There are similar language errors through the SL web pages. Granted access, > I'll just fix them all, as this would in fact be quicker than recording them > all in another medium. Otherwise, I'll pick of a page at a time periodically > and submit lists of errors, as I did above, if this would be welcome. At some > point I'd like to become involved in volunteering time for actual software > maintenance, but my thought is that providing polish would be a reasonable > start. > -- __________________________________________________ Troy Dawson [log in to unmask] (630)840-6468 Fermilab ComputingDivision/SCF/FEF/SLSMS Group __________________________________________________